river talks by Tavake

At Thursday we walked to  omaru creek we went to see how we can  clean the creek one man had a long chain on his leg and the next man was in the creek.

Then we saw some glass people in the water  it was cool because to kids make glass people.

and We saw one girl how was dancing and we saw some Art it was some big. We saw the dolphins .

                               

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Hook	My introduction is boring. It is difficult to read.	My introduction is easy to read and has some interest for my audience.	My audience is hooked into my subject, it grabs their interest so they feel like they want to read more.	When someone reads my introduction they are left feeling intrigued. They can't wait to read more.
Orientation	My introduction does not tell the reader what my writing is going to be about.	My audience has some idea about what I am writing about.	My audience is clear what I am writing about.	My introduction lets the reader know the direction and purpose of my writing.