Tuesday, 31 March 2015

My walking Animation

Here is my animation that I have made using hyper studio . It is of me walking around the Omaru creek

tavake omaru creek movie 1 from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

Thursday, 26 March 2015

The Green Dragons

What are two reason why Annie couldn’t play for the Green Dragons?
she was too little to play the Green Dragons.
2. What are two things Annie did when she watched from the sideline?
ran so fast on the sideline so fast as the green dragons
3. What did Annie’s dad to do help Sam and Dylan practise?

call the name of Sam and Dylan

Tuesday, 3 March 2015

river talks by Tavake

At Thursday we walked to  omaru creek we went to see how we can  clean the creek one man had a long chain on his leg and the next man was in the creek.
Then we saw some glass people in the water  it was cool because to kids make glass people.
and We saw one girl how was dancing and we saw some Art it was some big. We saw the dolphins .


Introduction Rubric
HookMy introduction is boring.
It is difficult to read.
My introduction is easy to read and has some interest for my audience.My audience is hooked into my subject, it grabs their interest so they feel like they want to read more.When someone reads my introduction they are left feeling intrigued. They can't wait to read more.
OrientationMy introduction does not tell the reader what my writing is going to be about.My audience has some idea about what I am writing about.My audience is clear what I am writing about.My introduction lets the reader know the direction and purpose of my writing.