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Monday 19 May 2014

One day me and Billy went to make a raft at my home. We found some rope and sticks. Billy put the raft in the water.We looked at the raft and it floated.We got on and we saw an eel eating. It was a boy and he swam away.The raft started to sink and we swam to the bank. We were happy.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Tavake I like your story because it is interesting and you used some clever words Your story is cool. From Bradley

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